I wrote this in the belonging essay, the teachers didn't pick it up yaayy!
repetition highlighted in blue. holy crap would sound super dumb if the teachers noticed. also. what a waste of words for me ahah. lucky the teachers dont look very deeply into essays but just give a scanning eye. (u get what i mean!)
"Pegging tent further and further away from Hadrian's wall" reveals the increasing cultural gap between father and son which alongside the exclusive pronoun "his" in "his polish friends" reveal the increasing cultural gap between father and son.
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