wooo i swear. i had no friggin coherency in my 2u essay!
the "how ignorant art thou in thy pride of wisdom" i managed to KIND OF connect to man's hubris/blindness something bout pursuit of knowledge and how this will llead to their downfall coz something bout transgressing natural boundaries LOLOLOL
this took up 2 paragraphs
and then i was like stuck so i used "Cease! you know not what it is you say" i really really vaguely tried to link my humanity/monstrosity paragraphs. and this is very bad because my argument was not sustained, i linked this part to humanity's naivety (used this word so many times, ABSOLUTELY COULD NOT FIND A REPLACEMENT word. it's gnna stand out like a sore thumb and show my incapability for better language LOL)
it was like i was trying to say something like, Oh comparison between man's naivety and monstrosity blurs the boundaries betwwen humanity monstrosity ok i donno what i was trying to say hear exactly OH NONONONONONONO
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